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today we first worked on how to create an atmosphere starting just from your senses and impressions and our little experiments... ;) Creepy, wasn't
it?
Here is what we finally said:
Narrating starting from your sensations and
feelings
The desert island:
Arriving/landing: by boat, by airplane.
I came to the desert island by plane but it crashed into the ocean. I felt cold and
wet.
Reaching the beach: I managed to reach the beach walking in the sand. It felt like biscuits under my feet.
Getting into the forest: I felt lost and exhausted. I was injured/hurt/wounded. My eyes hurt. I felt as if I were
blind, but I knew I was in the forest. It felt dry and like twigs under my feet.
In the forest, first meeting with the natives: I was taken by people to their camp. They fed me soup with mysterious
ingredients. It felt as if I were eating human eye balls and a warm beating heart.
Structure: Exprimer une émotion/sensation
The 5 senses:
Touch -> to feel
Smell -> to smell
Taste -> to taste
Hearing -> to sound
Sight -> to look … + adj
+ like +
nom
+ as if +
phrase (prétérit modal)
Ex: It feels strange and mysterious
It smells like vinegar
It tastes as if it were dead fish
Then, after revealing the real objects from the bag, we continued the lesson with a recap
of your homework about Joseph Conrad and we began to study an extract from one of his biggest success: "Heart of Darkness".
Here is what we have begun to say about it:
Heart of Darkness:
Type of narrative: 1st person narrative. The point of view is Marlow’s. It’s an internal focalization.
Who: Marlow and his men (pilgrims) + the natives.
Where: On a river, into the forest, in the wild/wilderness (a wild dense jungle)
When: At night
What: Marlow is looking for a friend (Kurtz) who may be lost/ may have been kidnapped. As he
sails up the river, he feels as if someone were watching and following him. In this imagination, it sounds as if the natives were preparing a ceremony/sacrifice. Because of the heavy foliage and
the dark, he feels as if he were blind.
Cf. : « bodies swaying » Sense of sight
« eyes rolling » Sense of
sight
« feet stomping » Sense of hearing
Additonal vocabulary:
A steamer
A steam-ship
A roof
(to) sail = to go by boat
(to) manage to = (to) succeed in ...
HW:
- pour mercredi, vous devez répondre aux questions 2 à 5 de la fiche guide de compréhension du texte.
- faites-vous des fiches de lexique par thème. Je vais bientôt ramasser des classeurs pour vérifier que le travail est fait correctement.
Documents:
- Téléchargez le texte ici.
- Téléchargez la fiche de compréhension ici.
Merci!
C.Tamaillon
Euh alors pour ça j'avais organisé un petit jeu de mise en scène:
L'arrivée sur une plage déserte.
Il faut mettre dans un grand sac opaque plusieurs items différents que tu compartimentes dans plusieurs petits sacs. Ces items symboliseront tous une chose que tu veux leur faire se représenter à l'arrivée sur l'île.
So imagine you're arriving on an island and you're getting off your boat (the beettle in our story). What can you feel? (et là tu fais plonger la main dans le sac et leur fait faire des phrases en: it feels... + adj / it feels like + nom / it feels as if... + phrase.It smells like / ... etc... tu auras compris le principe... :)
A toi d'être imaginative pour trouver des choses évocatrices mais qui puissent aussi se manger (les yeux fermés bien sûr!!!!).
Ex: water - de l'eau vinaigrée de cornichons / sand: des morceaux de cookies écrasés / the eyes of the savages in the soup: des grains de raisin sans pépin pelés, ... etc... bref... tout pour construire une atmosphère...
Will you dare...? you're a woose! etc... sont autant de choses sympa qu'on peut également leur enseigner à ce moment-là.
HIH.
P.